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Subject: ComedyPastas Tue Mar 27, 2012 5:49 pm
Before you read this, read the pasta before you watch the video. In the next post down, you will see Bolero's summary in 18 minutes. Please POST A DAMN REPLY because I need feedback if I need to edit stuff. Thank you.
Description for BEN DROWNED review:
Here is our first major project. The ComedyPastas are our very own Creepypasta reviews, but in the form of improv. In our pilot episode, we review BEN DROWNED, or the Haunted Majora's Mask cartridge. Make sure you have read this Creepypasta before viewing this video.
Staring: CookieMonsterPunkSES - Creator of Fusion Coil Productions superscourge300 - Carter from the known Zombie Attack Series Bolero5097 - Creator of "The Creepypasta Episodes" Fortress2player - Friend of Bolero5097
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Subject: Re: ComedyPastas Tue Mar 27, 2012 5:57 pm
Here is "The Creepypasta Episode" of Ben Drowned by Bolero5097 just so you don't have to read through all that crap to understand.
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Subject: Re: ComedyPastas Tue Mar 27, 2012 6:55 pm
Good job! Except Scourge needs a new mic.
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Subject: Re: ComedyPastas Tue Mar 27, 2012 7:05 pm
No offense, but i clicked off because i got bored.
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Subject: Re: ComedyPastas Tue Mar 27, 2012 7:30 pm
FivePotatoes wrote:
No offense, but i clicked off because i got bored.
Yeah i agree a bit, at the beginning you guys talk too long and i lost interest fast (might just be my short attention span speaking) I suggest you cut it down a little bit or just leave it as is
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Subject: Re: ComedyPastas Tue Mar 27, 2012 7:34 pm
Sulurulez wrote:
FivePotatoes wrote:
No offense, but i clicked off because i got bored.
Yeah i agree a bit, at the beginning you guys talk too long and i lost interest fast (might just be my short attention span speaking) I suggest you cut it down a little bit or just leave it as is
what the hell do you expect them to do?
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Subject: Re: ComedyPastas Tue Mar 27, 2012 7:37 pm
bl1i8n2k wrote:
Sulurulez wrote:
FivePotatoes wrote:
No offense, but i clicked off because i got bored.
Yeah i agree a bit, at the beginning you guys talk too long and i lost interest fast (might just be my short attention span speaking) I suggest you cut it down a little bit or just leave it as is
what the hell do you expect them to do?
Exactly.
Sulurulez Cool
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Subject: Re: ComedyPastas Tue Mar 27, 2012 7:39 pm
bl1i8n2k wrote:
Sulurulez wrote:
FivePotatoes wrote:
No offense, but i clicked off because i got bored.
Yeah i agree a bit, at the beginning you guys talk too long and i lost interest fast (might just be my short attention span speaking) I suggest you cut it down a little bit or just leave it as is
what the hell do you expect them to do?
I dont know >.< he asked for our opinions, we gave them >.>
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Subject: Re: ComedyPastas Tue Mar 27, 2012 7:41 pm
Sulurulez wrote:
bl1i8n2k wrote:
Sulurulez wrote:
Yeah i agree a bit, at the beginning you guys talk too long and i lost interest fast (might just be my short attention span speaking) I suggest you cut it down a little bit or just leave it as is
what the hell do you expect them to do?
I dont know >.< he asked for our opinions, we gave them >.>
...And what we could do to fix them.
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Subject: Re: ComedyPastas Tue Mar 27, 2012 7:49 pm
Fr0z3nD3m1s3 wrote:
Sulurulez wrote:
bl1i8n2k wrote:
what the hell do you expect them to do?
I dont know >.< he asked for our opinions, we gave them >.>
...And what we could do to fix them.
Possibly add gameplay of a different game as you are talking. It provides the watcher with something interesting when the boring parts are up,.
Sulurulez Cool
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Subject: Re: ComedyPastas Tue Mar 27, 2012 7:53 pm
FivePotatoes wrote:
Fr0z3nD3m1s3 wrote:
Sulurulez wrote:
I dont know >.< he asked for our opinions, we gave them >.>
...And what we could do to fix them.
Possibly add gameplay of a different game as you are talking. It provides the watcher with something interesting when the boring parts are up,.
Thats actually a good idea. keeps people from clicking off
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Subject: Re: ComedyPastas Tue Mar 27, 2012 10:55 pm
I'm starting to edit it now. It'll probably be all night. I'm hoping I could catch Scourge online.
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Subject: Re: ComedyPastas Wed Mar 28, 2012 8:42 am
To get the views and traffic to your videos; you have to put all your effort into it. I sat there for 12 hours straight making my first episode and I get hundreds of views on my videos now for it! Make sure you put 100% effort into it and you will get what you hope for!
I did get bored of watching it eventually, honestly; it's too long and if we want it to be funny; you gotta' make it funnier (SCRIPTS!!!), hardly anyone can make such hilarious and always-wanting-to-come-back material from improvisation. Also if you do write a script, make sure your opening paragraph is "eye-catching", so people will continue you watching.
For your first try, it was alright; but alot of work is going to be needed guys =}
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Subject: Re: ComedyPastas Fri Mar 30, 2012 2:51 pm
I only JUST saw the Episode and fuck me is it awesome, I really enjoyed doing this! Hope to do another one sometime soon, let me know when okay!
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Subject: Re: ComedyPastas Fri Mar 30, 2012 3:45 pm
superscourge300 wrote:
I only JUST saw the Episode and fuck me is it awesome, I really enjoyed doing this! Hope to do another one sometime soon, let me know when okay!
You're alive?
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Subject: love our show Fri Mar 30, 2012 9:48 pm
i love the show we need to fix teh lag well when i get my mic @)@
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Subject: Re: ComedyPastas Fri Mar 30, 2012 11:08 pm
Official first episode. Opinions, please.
Editted some audio out from the last one.
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Subject: Re: ComedyPastas Fri Mar 30, 2012 11:53 pm
So much better than the first one, seeming as my eyes were more occupied than before
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Subject: Re: ComedyPastas Sat Mar 31, 2012 8:31 am
Sulurulez wrote:
So much better than the first one, seeming as my eyes were more occupied than before
Pretty much this.
Have you realized that the new video that was released was an April Fool's joke? Just sayin'. It's called "king kong.avi"
"Free" and "2" were changed back. You might want to edit that video again so you don't look like a dumbass
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Subject: Re: ComedyPastas Mon Apr 09, 2012 9:58 am
Ok, Episode 2 is "Sonic.exe". We will film it on the last Sunday at Noon CT. Here are some helpful places to look up for research:
I only JUST saw the Episode and fuck me is it awesome, I really enjoyed doing this! Hope to do another one sometime soon, let me know when okay! 
